This is a really powerful film, Kayla. I do have some suggestions to tweak it further and refine a couple of rough edges. For example, what it mean to move the title to halfway over the horizon? Why animate motion in all your photos—would they work better as static shots, and why/why not? Can we make your voice more resonant and intimate? This is good, but there’s still a way to go.
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