FMP Year One

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About kaylalaisby

My names Kayla and I'm a film student. And this is my blog. This is where I will be posting short films, music, photographs and other inspiring things to help me on my current college course. Enjoy!
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One Response to FMP Year One

  1. kendalcollegefilm says:

    This is a really powerful film, Kayla. I do have some suggestions to tweak it further and refine a couple of rough edges. For example, what it mean to move the title to halfway over the horizon? Why animate motion in all your photos—would they work better as static shots, and why/why not? Can we make your voice more resonant and intimate? This is good, but there’s still a way to go.

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